outofdejavu
Member
- Joined
- Aug 24, 2008
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Taiwan
- Current Location
- Taiwan
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John Doe is an unmarried retired teacher. He took a trip to a countryside surrounded by mountains and a wide sweep of sea.
His heart was so glued to the rural soil that he packed up necessary personal effects after he went back home and moved to that countryside in the subsequent week.
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I hope the wording in bold does not look/sound awkward or convey weird sense. If it does, kindly help me out with refining the wording. Very much obliged.
John Doe is an unmarried retired teacher. He took a trip to a countryside surrounded by mountains and a wide sweep of sea.
His heart was so glued to the rural soil that he packed up necessary personal effects after he went back home and moved to that countryside in the subsequent week.
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I hope the wording in bold does not look/sound awkward or convey weird sense. If it does, kindly help me out with refining the wording. Very much obliged.