A Tamil Movie Nachiyaar

[Gaya87]

Hi, can someone please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long synopsis
Nachiyaar is an honest and persistent cop living in the urban city of Chennai. She is currently working on a case that involves a minor love story: a young naive lover who has been accused of raping her girlfriend. The case seems easy enough, until it suddenly takes a turn for the worse. How will Nachiyaar resolve the case that has restricted the life of the young lovers?

Short synopsis
A police officer, Nachiyaar is on a mission to uncover the truth of a young man who is accused of raping his girlfriend. Can she bring the young man to justice?

 

[TheParser]

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Hello, Gaya87:

1. Congratulations on your good English. I could not find any grammatical mistakes.

a. You made a typo(graphical) error in the long synopsis: You accidentally wrote "her girlfriend" instead of "his girlfriend."



2. In the long synopsis, you write: "How will Nachiyaar resolve the case that has restricted the life of the young lovers?"

a. Maybe I am the only one, but I interpret that sentence as implying that the young man is innocent of the accusation.

3. Then in the short synopsis, you write: "Can she bring the young man to justice?"

a. Maybe again I am the only one, but I interpret that sentence as implying that the young man is guilty of the accusation.

4. I have not, of course, seen the movie. But if the young man is, indeed, innocent, then you might consider writing something like this: "Can she obtain justice for the young man?"


P.S. Instead of "persistent," you may wish to use "dedicated."