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    #1

    Smile please correct my envelop

    I live near your fruit monger. As you know, in your fruit monger’s alley, we always have traffic jam. It’s not only make drivers angry when they cross this area but it is also dangerous for people who want to cross the side alley. After a little research we’ve reached that all of these problems are due to your big blue fruit cars had parked on the side alley.

    Would you please manage your fruit unload process? For example do it at dawn and of course don’t park the burden car on the alley’s side?

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    #2

    Traffic jams (correct my letter)

    Say:

    We are always having traffic jams.

    And:

    it is dangerous to people who want to cross the side alley.

    And:

    we have reached the conclusion that....

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    #3

    Re: Traffic jams (correct my letter)

    Hi rasoolAsal, and welcome to the forum.

    Who are you writing that text to, and why are you writing it? Is it just an exercise?

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    #4

    Re: please correct my envelop

    I'm sure you have noticed that your thread title has been changed from post #2 onwards. However, I have replied to your original post so that your title appears. Can you explain what on earth "Please correct my envelop" means?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #5

    Re: please correct my envelop

    thanks all guys
    It was just a practice

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    #6

    Re: please correct my envelop

    Quote Originally Posted by rasoolAsal View Post
    Thanks, everyone. all guys
    It was just a practice piece.
    I don't think we've finished yet. I would have made more changes/corrections than Tarheel did but before I do, I'd still like to know what "Please correct my envelop" means.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #7

    Re: please correct my envelop

    rasoolAsal, do you mean "letter" instead of "envelope"?

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    #8

    Re: please correct my envelop

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    I don't think we've finished yet. I would have made more changes/corrections than Tarheel did but before I do, I'd still like to know what "Please correct my envelop" means.
    Thanks a lot man
    I really enjoy your answers,everyone
    Unfortunately in my English class,my teacher never correct my grammar
    I hope I learn more from you and other techers

    by envelope, I meant letter
    Sorry

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    #9

    Re: please correct my envelop

    Quote Originally Posted by teechar View Post
    rasoolAsal, do you mean "letter" instead of "envelope"?
    Yes baby
    Sorry for my mistake!

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    #10

    Re: please correct my envelop

    Quote Originally Posted by rasoolAsal View Post
    Thanks a lot. man
    I really enjoy your answers, everyone.
    Unfortunately, in my English class, my teacher never corrects my grammar.
    I hope I learn more from you and other teachers.

    By "envelope", I meant "letter".
    Sorry.
    Quote Originally Posted by rasoolAsal View Post
    Yes. baby
    Sorry for my mistake!
    Please note my corrections above. Note that addressing people as "man" and "baby" are inappropriate on this forum. Save them for your friends and loved ones.

    It is important to follow these rules of written English at all times:

    - Start every sentence with a capital letter.
    - End every sentence with one appropriate punctuation mark.
    - Always capitalise the word "I".
    - Do not put a space before a comma, full stop, question mark or exclamation mark.
    - Always put a space after a comma, full stop, question mark or exclamation mark.

    It might be a good idea to print this post and keep it near you when you're writing a post so you can refer to it.

    If your English teacher doesn't correct your grammar, what does he/she do?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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