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  1. Newbie
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      • Native Language:
      • Spanish
      • Home Country:
      • Argentina
      • Current Location:
      • Argentina

    • Join Date: Apr 2018
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    #1

    Could you help with the lyrics of my song?

    looks like an angel
    speaks like an angel
    playing games
    where you are a card


    She makes you feel special
    giving you everything
    but makes you feel pain
    when it's done


    It's a lie
    It's a lie
    every word
    every time
    It's a lie
    It's a lie
    when you fall
    when you smile


    forget my name
    i need some space
    to fix me, to wake me up
    forget my number
    you make it harder, harder, harder

    It's Ok?

  2. Editor, UsingEnglish.com
    English Teacher
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      • Native Language:
      • British English
      • Home Country:
      • UK
      • Current Location:
      • Japan

    • Join Date: Nov 2002
    • Posts: 65,790
    #2

    Re: Could you help with the lyrics of my song?

    to fix me, to wake me up
    I would use myself instead of me in this line. You could say to fix myself, to wake up, which would not change the length of the line.

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