Could you help with the lyrics of my song?

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6ixtyisdead

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looks like an angel
speaks like an angel
playing games
where you are a card


She makes you feel special
giving you everything
but makes you feel pain
when it's done


It's a lie
It's a lie
every word
every time
It's a lie
It's a lie
when you fall
when you smile


forget my name
i need some space
to fix me, to wake me up
forget my number
you make it harder, harder, harder

It's Ok?
 

Tdol

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to fix me, to wake me up

I would use myself instead of me in this line. You could say to fix myself, to wake up, which would not change the length of the line.
 
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