[Grammar] Quick lecture about pigeons (Corection nedded)

[Mohammadd]

pigeons has some special features that characterize them to other birds.
first features is about their foods that they eat only wheat the best thing about them is they aren't eat faces so their meat is empty of any harm matters.
second is about their breeding which is very exiting that they put only only 2 eggs each time, one is male and the other is female!
third is about their great memory that they memorize where they live so if you take them out 2kilometes and put them there, they will return!

 

[teechar]

Hello Mohammadd, and welcome to the forum.
Is the above homework?

 

[Mohammadd]

Hello Mohammadd, and welcome to the forum.
Is the above homework?

Hi teecher
Yes It's kind of a little homework for my practicing

 

[teechar]

Hi teecher,
Yes, it's kind of a little homework for my practice.

When do you have to submit it to your teacher?

 

[Mohammadd]

Actually I've submitted but now, I have to correct it for myself:roll:

 

[teechar]

Actually, I've submitted but now, I have to correct it for myself. :roll:

What comments/corrections has your teacher made?

 

[Mohammadd]

Nothing :shock:
He said thank you

 

[teechar]

Nothing! :shock:
He just said "Thank you".

Pigeons [STRIKE]has[/STRIKE] have some special features that [STRIKE]characterize them to[/STRIKE] set them apart from other birds.
First, [STRIKE]features is about their foods that[/STRIKE] they eat only wheat, and the best thing about them is they never eat droppings, [STRIKE]aren't eat faces[/STRIKE] so their meat is [STRIKE]empty[/STRIKE] free of any harmful matter. [STRIKE]s.[/STRIKE]

Second, [STRIKE]is about[/STRIKE] their breeding pattern [STRIKE]which[/STRIKE] is very exiting in that ["in that" is explanatory. It means "because"] they [STRIKE]put[/STRIKE] lay only [STRIKE]only[/STRIKE] two eggs each time; one is male and the other is female!

Third, [STRIKE]is about their[/STRIKE] they have a great memory [STRIKE]that they[/STRIKE] and can memorize where they live, so if you take them out two kilometers and [STRIKE]put[/STRIKE] release them there, they will [STRIKE]return[/STRIKE] find their way home!

See above.
Note that you can also say "... lay only two eggs each time, one male and the other female."
https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/set-sth-sb-apart