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    #1

    Once finished the first stage

    Hello.

    Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

    "Once finished the first stage of his new self-imposed ritual, Tim left the building where he lived wearing and old shirt, blue shorts and sandals with socks. He walked a couple of blocks looking for the right place for the second stage, which he found near a plaza. In that place, Tim took a velvet pouch which contains his "lucky coins" out of his pocket shorts. Then, he took out three coins with a strange figure on one side and throws the coins on the floor."


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    Re: Once finished the first stage

    Quote Originally Posted by Nikitus View Post
    Hello.

    Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

    "Once he had finished the first stage of his new self-imposed ritual, Tim left the building where he lived wearing and an old shirt, blue shorts and sandals with socks. He walked a couple of blocks, looking for the right place for the second stage, which he found near a plaza. In that place, There, Tim took a velvet pouch which contained his "lucky coins" out of his the pocket of his shorts. Then (no comma here) he took out three coins with a strange figure on one side and throws threw the coins on the floor."

    Thanks.
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