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    please help proofread my essay

    Last edited by cpark013; 12-Jun-2018 at 00:31.

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    Re: please help proofread my essay

    Welcome to the forum.

    That is a huge block of text! You need to put an empty line space between each paragraph, if nothing else. What are you going to do with this essay when it's ready?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: please help proofread my essay

    I am going to submit this essay for a job position that I am applying. Thanks for your comment.

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    #4

    Re: please help proofread my essay

    Quote Originally Posted by cpark013 View Post
    I am going to submit this essay for a job position that I am applying. Thanks for your comment.
    Where has the essay gone? I remember seeing the text duplicated in post #1.
    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: please help proofread my essay

    The OP has removed the entire text from post #1. Thanks for wasting our time, cpark013. Thread closed.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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