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[vander.raman62]

Dear Sir/Mam
This side Ramanpreet Kaur. I am graduate in Engineering with 83.11%. I hail from Punjab, India. Actually, in the times to come , I am planning to move to canada for higher studies. (So far my academic career has been very good. I am a hardworking student. )While i was surfing for some renowned universities in Brampton, I got your university name on google. It will be of great help if you answer my few questions, I shall be grateful to you:-
1.) After engineering in information technology field, which courses can i opt for in yiur university, please give me list of those.
2.) Can i opt for any course like Masters in Business Administration?
3.) Please provide me information regarding the courses duration and fee structure in detail.
4.) I would also like to know about career scope after completion of course.
5.) How can i get admission in any particular course? What is the procedure? Do i need to pass any entrance exam(If yes, then details about the same)? or is there any other procedure?
I shall be grateful to you if you answer my questions pointwise in detail, like i have asked them.
Deep Gratitude in advance!
Eagerly waiting for your reply.

 

[emsr2d2]

Dear Sir/[STRIKE]Mam[/STRIKE] Madam

[STRIKE]This side[/STRIKE] My name is/I am Ramanpreet Kaur. I am a graduate in Engineering with a score of 83.11%. I [STRIKE]hail[/STRIKE] am/come from Punjab, India.

[STRIKE]Actually, in the times to come ,[/STRIKE] In the next few weeks/months/years, I am planning to move to Canada [STRIKE]for higher[/STRIKE] to continue my studies. [STRIKE](So far my academic career has been very good. I am a hardworking student. )[/STRIKE]

While I was [STRIKE]surfing[/STRIKE] searching online for [STRIKE]some[/STRIKE] renowned universities in Brampton, I [STRIKE]got[/STRIKE] found your university. [STRIKE]name on google.[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]It will be of great help[/STRIKE] I would be very grateful if you would answer [STRIKE]my[/STRIKE] a few questions. [STRIKE]I shall be grateful to you:-[/STRIKE]

1. After engineering in information technology field, which courses can I [STRIKE]opt for[/STRIKE] choose [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] at [STRIKE]yiur[/STRIKE] your university? [STRIKE]please give me list of those.[/STRIKE]
2. Can I opt for any course [STRIKE]like[/STRIKE] such as a Masters in Business Administration?
3. Please provide me with detailed information regarding the courses' duration and fee structure. [STRIKE]in detail.[/STRIKE]
4. I would also like to know about my career [STRIKE]scope[/STRIKE] choices/opportunities after completion of a course.
5. How can I [STRIKE]get[/STRIKE] gain admission [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] to [STRIKE]any particular[/STRIKE] a course? What is the procedure? Do I need to pass any entrance exam? If [STRIKE]yes[/STRIKE] so, [STRIKE]then[/STRIKE] please provide details. [STRIKE]about the same)?[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]or is there any other procedure?[/STRIKE]

[STRIKE]I shall be grateful to you if you answer my questions pointwise in detail, like i have asked them.[/STRIKE]
[STRIKE]Deep Gratitude in advance![/STRIKE]

[STRIKE]Eagerly waiting for your reply.[/STRIKE] I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully

[Your name]

Welcome to the forum. :hi:

See above. Your name should be at the bottom of the letter so there is actually no need to give it in sentence 1.