how to write request letter for drawing approval to client

[umarbenz89]

please correct below letter,

i would like to request for xxxx building # 94 drawing approval.. please explain

 

[Tdol]

I would request the approval for the building, rather than the other way round.

 

[emsr2d2]

Please correct the letter below. [STRIKE]letter,[/STRIKE]

I would like to request for xxxx building #94 drawing approval. (I don't know what this sentence means so I have corrected only the spacing, capitalisation and punctuation.)

Please explain.

I have no idea what you're asking for in the main sentence. Please note my other corrections though. It's important to follow these rules of written English at all times:

- Start every sentence with a capital letter.
- Always capitalise the word "I" (first person singular).
- End every sentence with one appropriate punctuation mark.