Experience as Firmware Development Student at <name> for 1 year and 2 months

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<name> is a company name which I choose to censor (it isn't relevant anyway).
"Firmware Development Student" is the name of my current position, and this is why the words here are in capital letters.
I want to indicate in this sentence my experience in my current position.

Does the grammar in the sentence correct?
 
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Re: Experience as Firmware Development Student at <name> for 1 year and 2 months

[STRIKE]<name> is[/STRIKE] I work at a company, the name of which [STRIKE]I choose to censor (it[/STRIKE] isn't relevant. [STRIKE]anyway).[/STRIKE]

"Firmware Development Student" is the name of my current position, and this is why the words here are in capital letters.

I want to indicate in this sentence my experience in my current position.

[STRIKE]Does[/STRIKE] Is the grammar in the sentence correct? I don't know which sentence you're referring to. You have written three sentences before this one. None of them mention your experience.

Welcome to the forum. :hi:

Please see my corrections and comments above.
 

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Re: Experience as Firmware Development Student at <name> for 1 year and 2 months

Welcome to the forum. :hi:

Please see my corrections and comments above.

Thanks for the comment. My relevant sentence is in the title of the post.
 

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Re: Experience as Firmware Development Student at <name> for 1 year and 2 months

Thanks for the comment. My relevant sentence is in the title of the post.

OK, I missed that. Please make sure you put all relevant parts of your post in the main body of the text. It's particularly helpful when we use the "Quote" function - titles don't appear in the quote box.

Is "Experience as Firmware Development Student at [name of company] for 1 year and 2 months" exactly what you plan to write? It's not a complete sentence. It might work as a bullet point.
 

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Re: Experience as Firmware Development Student at <name> for 1 year and 2 months

OK, I missed that. Please make sure you put all relevant parts of your post in the main body of the text. It's particularly helpful when we use the "Quote" function - titles don't appear in the quote box.

Is "Experience as Firmware Development Student at [name of company] for 1 year and 2 months" exactly what you plan to write? It's not a complete sentence. It might work as a bullet point.

I want to write it in my resume. The goal here is to indicate my experience in software development.
 
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