Re: Inquire letter

Originally Posted by
Jamila2
Dear teachers Please help me to correct this inquiry letter.
Dear [name of recipient]
I'm xxxxx and I'm a microbiologist. I I don't know if you remember me but we have previously met you twice, First time in the once at the XXXX conference in [month/year] and second one in then at the meeting on [date]. If you remembered me.
I'm reaching out contacting you to ask about if you have set a time for the second meeting. The underlined part doesn't make sense. You have already met twice so this must be your third meeting. did you set time for it. I'm really exciting excited to start and do my share as a part of this great country.
xxxxx
See above. The end is very odd. How exactly is going to a meeting doing your share as part of a great country?
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