friends read book

[MNDutch]

Does this sound okay?

My dear friends know this about me...I don't read many book. But I am proud to say, I am reading a book....this book. If you have "control" issues, I encourage you to read it too....even if you're not a book reader.

 

[emsr2d2]

Does this sound okay?

My dear friends know this about me - I don't read many books but I am proud to say (no comma here) I am reading a book. This book. If you have control (no need for quotation marks) issues, I encourage you to read it too, even if you're not a book reader.

See above. Note that we don't use ellipses very often.

 

[teechar]

Hello MNDutch, and welcome to the forum.

Note that I have changed the title of your thread by including some keywords from your question in it.

Also, consider using "avid reader" instead of "book reader" in the above.