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    Enquiry letter to university

    I would like to ask about mistakes in my letter. ......- are proper names or personal information.


    Dear Sir/ Madam,

    I am applying for ... at your university at .... academic year. I am currently studying Mathematics and Chemistry on extended level but I would like to write .... exam also from Physics, for which I am preparing unassisted. Is it possible for me to apply for a Foundation Year with ... from physics? I would also ask if there is possibility to apply for a course with and without Foundation Year and what are the requirement for a Foundation Year for ....
    Thank you for your time considering questions.

    Your faithfully,
    ......

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    Re: Enquiry letter to university

    Quote Originally Posted by Asuan View Post
    I would like to ask about mistakes in my letter. ......- are proper names or personal information.


    Dear Sir/ Madam,

    I am applying for ... at your university at .... academic year. I am currently studying Mathematics and Chemistry on extended level but I would like to write .... exam also from Physics, for which I am preparing unassisted. Is it possible for me to apply for a Foundation Year with ... from physics? I would also ask if there is possibility to apply for a course with and without Foundation Year and what are the requirement for a Foundation Year for ....
    Thank you for your time considering questions.

    Your faithfully,
    ......
    Hello Asuan, and welcome to the forum.
    The parts I highlighted in blue are not very clear. Can you rewrite/explain them?

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    Re: Enquiry letter to university

    I think I can clear up the first blue part. The OP is saying that where they have written a string of dots, those dots replace proper names or personal information.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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