cover letter for job

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i need help to sound more english

To whom it may concern,

this is my application for the Sales representative for sanitary products position advertised in mojposao.hr.
Because of my education and previous work I was immediately interested in this job. I did a research on company's work and products and I do believe I could justify my position. As you will notice on the attached CV, I have work experience in different jobs connected to sales, buyers, suppliers, advertising, market, travel, working with people, communication, etc., as I started to work at fifteen.
I am willing to learn Slovenian in shortest time possible. My frequent visits to England and Scotland, gave me knowledge to manage my English conversations well. I am experienced in paperwork and making contracts. I am also willing to constantly learn what is asked of me, and do what is necessary for the benefit of the company.
In summary I would like to say I can show you great sense of responsibility and ability to work under pressure. Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hear from you.

Sincerely,

 

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Hello blabbla, and welcome to the forum.

I need help to make the following sound natural. [Strike]more english [/Strike]


To whom it may concern,


This is my application for the Sales Representative for Sanitary Products position advertised [Strike]in[/Strike] on mojposao.hr.


Because of my education and previous work, I was immediately interested in this job. I did [Strike]a[/Strike] [no “a”] research on the company's work and products, and I [Strike]do believe I could justify[/Strike] am confident that I am a suitable candidate for this [Strike]my[/Strike] position. As you will notice [Strike]on[/Strike] from the attached CV, I have work experience in different jobs connected to sales, buyers, suppliers, advertising, marketing, travel, working with people, and communication, [Strike], etc.,[/Strike] as I started [Strike]to[/Strike] working at fifteen.


I am willing to learn Slovenian in the shortest time possible. My frequent visits to England and Scotland [Strike], gave me knowledge to manage[/Strike] helped me consolidate my English conversation skills. [Strike]well.[/Strike] I am experienced in paperwork and making contracts. I am also willing to [Strike]constantly[/Strike] learn what is asked of me, and do what is necessary for the benefit of the company.


In summary I would like to say I [Strike]can show you[/Strike] have a great sense of responsibility and [Strike]ability to[/Strike] can work effectively under pressure.


Thank you for your consideration, and I look forward to hearing from you.


Yours faithfully,
Les Dalton
[Strike]Sincerely,[/Strike]