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razae rabbi

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Hello Alex

Hope you are doing well !

According your below comments, we had been checked with factory and know that, it we follow same attached way for Sprite then we need to change all isobellet label.
so could you please relook and advise.

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Rabbi
 

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Hello Alex

I hope you are doing well! (Don't leave a space before an exclamation mark.)

[STRIKE]According your below comments,[/STRIKE] As requested [in your email below], we [STRIKE]had been[/STRIKE] have checked with the factory and know that, it we follow same attached way for Sprite then we need to change all isobellet label.

[STRIKE]so[/STRIKE] Could you please [STRIKE]relook[/STRIKE] have another look and advise.

Best regards

Rabbi

Welcome to the forum. :hi:

Please note my corrections above in red. I have underlined and changed to blue some sections I don't understand. The long phrase in the second paragraph is incomprehensible. Can you explain it in another way? (For a start, I suspect that "it" was supposed to say "if".)
With regard to "advise", you need to elaborate. What do you want Alex to advise you about?
 
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