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    Hello Alex

    Hope you are doing well !

    According your below comments, we had been checked with factory and know that, it we follow same attached way for Sprite then we need to change all isobellet label.
    so could you please relook and advise.

    Best regards

    Rabbi

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    Re: Mail

    Quote Originally Posted by razae rabbi View Post
    Hello Alex

    I hope you are doing well! (Don't leave a space before an exclamation mark.)

    According your below comments, As requested [in your email below], we had been have checked with the factory and know that, it we follow same attached way for Sprite then we need to change all isobellet label.

    so Could you please relook have another look and advise.

    Best regards

    Rabbi
    Welcome to the forum.

    Please note my corrections above in red. I have underlined and changed to blue some sections I don't understand. The long phrase in the second paragraph is incomprehensible. Can you explain it in another way? (For a start, I suspect that "it" was supposed to say "if".)
    With regard to "advise", you need to elaborate. What do you want Alex to advise you about?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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