sanwalah
New member
- Joined
- Jan 11, 2019
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Urdu
- Home Country
- Pakistan
- Current Location
- Pakistan
Hello there!
I will be grateful if someone could review this statement of purpose.
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I would like to apply for the course of ... At the university of ... . The course is very well designed to meet the needs of IT professional who wants to broaden his knowledge and advance courses are related to research topic I am interested in. I have done my MS in Telecommunication from |______| and I have completed my BCS from |______|. After doing my MS I started a job as an Office Manager, responsible for IT related (Networking, Software and Hardware) affairs, that is still going on.
I have always felt a need to get higher education, and to increase my knowledge, and to have authority over my subject. Research and development according to the needs of my society and people living around me, whether they are business professionals, Industrial workers or layman living a normal life, is my objective; thus to ease the lives of people around me.
A career that is based on higher education, international exposure, practical knowledge and research methodologies attained at your university, it will certainly pay off by making things easier for others and mine too. Teachers and professors, they always have respect and honor granted to them and I do believe that by becoming a part of a University's / College's faculty, I will play a positive role and will influence the lives of students in a good way.
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It is for Masters in IT / Computer Sciences at German University.
Can we call it a letter of motivation too?
Is it sufficient? does it lack something?
Regards,
I will be grateful if someone could review this statement of purpose.
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I would like to apply for the course of ... At the university of ... . The course is very well designed to meet the needs of IT professional who wants to broaden his knowledge and advance courses are related to research topic I am interested in. I have done my MS in Telecommunication from |______| and I have completed my BCS from |______|. After doing my MS I started a job as an Office Manager, responsible for IT related (Networking, Software and Hardware) affairs, that is still going on.
I have always felt a need to get higher education, and to increase my knowledge, and to have authority over my subject. Research and development according to the needs of my society and people living around me, whether they are business professionals, Industrial workers or layman living a normal life, is my objective; thus to ease the lives of people around me.
A career that is based on higher education, international exposure, practical knowledge and research methodologies attained at your university, it will certainly pay off by making things easier for others and mine too. Teachers and professors, they always have respect and honor granted to them and I do believe that by becoming a part of a University's / College's faculty, I will play a positive role and will influence the lives of students in a good way.
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It is for Masters in IT / Computer Sciences at German University.
Can we call it a letter of motivation too?
Is it sufficient? does it lack something?
Regards,