[Application] Email (University application) , is it correct ?

[ohemx]

Hello everyone, can you help me check this email Please ( ^o^)/
"Dear Sir or Madam,

This is to request more information about the Civil Engineering MSc program at the LONDON'S GLOBAL UNIVERSITY. I am highly interested in this program, and I wish to apply for it in 2019/2020.
I am currently studying in Public Works Manager - Senior Technician program at INSFP Kouba (Ex. ITTPB) in Algiers, Algeria, specialized in infrastructure projects. I will graduate next month, and I am in an internship in a government company called "Directorate of Public Works of the capital, Algiers" which is involved in large infrastructure projects.
I would like to inquire information about qualification and. In particular, is the program previously mentioned one of your accepted qualifications? If so, I would be grateful if you could indicate the academic entry requirements for Algerian students applying for your Civil Engineering program.
Thank you in advance for your attention to my request. I look forward to receiving your response.

Sincerely,
iss Rah "

 

[teechar]

Ohemx: What you say in this thread doesn't match with the info in the following thread.

https://www.usingenglish.com/forum/...ail-to-University-of-Birmingham-Is-it-correct

Can you please explain?

 

[ohemx]

me and my brother going to apply to different universities

 

[teechar]

[Strike]me and[/Strike] My brother and I are going to apply to different universities.

I see.

... at [STRIKE]the LONDON'S GLOBAL UNIVERSITY.[/STRIKE]
London's Global University.

Note the correct capitalization, and no "the".
As for the rest of the letter, you can follow the advice given to you in your other thread.

 

[emsr2d2]

Why don't you encourage your brother to join the forum too? He can ask his own questions. It'll be easier for both of you.

 

[ohemx]

that's true, Also thanks for the help

 

[emsr2d2]

That's true. Also, thanks for the help.

Note my corrections above. It's very important to capitalise and punctuate correctly in written English.