Email (University application) , is it correct ?

[ohemx]

Hello everyone, can you help me check this email Please ( ^o^)/
"Dear Sir or Madam,

This is to request more information about the Civil Engineering MSc program at the LONDON'S GLOBAL UNIVERSITY. I am highly interested in this program, and I wish to apply for it in 2019/2020.
I am currently studying in Public Works Manager - Senior Technician program at INSFP Kouba (Ex. ITTPB) in Algiers, Algeria, specialized in infrastructure projects. I will graduate next month, and I am in an internship in a government company called "Directorate of Public Works of the capital, Algiers" which is involved in large infrastructure projects.
I would like to inquire information about qualification and. In particular, is the program previously mentioned one of your accepted qualifications? If so, I would be grateful if you could indicate the academic entry requirements for Algerian students applying for your Civil Engineering program.
Thank you in advance for your attention to my request. I look forward to receiving your response.

Sincerely,
iss Rah "

[teechar]

Ohemx: What you say in this thread doesn't match with the info in the following thread.

https://www.usingenglish.com/forum/t...-Is-it-correct

Can you please explain?

[ohemx]

me and my brother going to apply to different universities

[teechar]

me and My brother and I are going to apply to different universities.

I see.

... at the LONDON'S GLOBAL UNIVERSITY.
London's Global University.

Note the correct capitalization, and no "the".
As for the rest of the letter, you can follow the advice given to you in your other thread.

[emsr2d2]

Why don't you encourage your brother to join the forum too? He can ask his own questions. It'll be easier for both of you.

[ohemx]

that's true, Also thanks for the help

[emsr2d2]

That's true. Also, thanks for the help.

Note my corrections above. It's very important to capitalise and punctuate correctly in written English.