KelThuzad
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- Joined
- Mar 23, 2018
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Arabic
- Home Country
- Egypt
- Current Location
- Egypt
[FONT="]I was asked to send a letter on what could be improved for the company's website (it's related to job application) so I went on and wrote the letter in points and using my own words, can you please tell me if there are any mistakes/ the points idea is wrong..etc?
Subject: Personalsuggestions[/FONT]
[FONT="]Dear Mr XXX[/FONT]
[FONT="]I am writing thisletter to suggest you some improvement in the company’s website from my pointof view pointing them out one by one.[/FONT]
[FONT="]1-I’ll start offwith with a simple addition of adding Night mode, that detects the IP addressof the viewer, depending on his time zone the background becomes black and morenight-friendly. Or add the option of changing the colors after running the samelayout for months, it is nice to update such small areas and catch repeatvisitors by surprise![/FONT]
[FONT="]2-Displaying thepossibility of viewing from the mobile application[/FONT]
[FONT="]After browsing thewebsite for a little bit. It would be nice to find a blank space of yourcountry code and mobile number to fill in order to send you a link to downloadthe app, simply it eases notifications you want to send to the customer such asoffers, new services. Nevertheless the possibility of browsing offline thelatest itineraries aswell as consuming less data when online, a study has foundthat users and travelers in specific spend more time on phones and mobile apps.[/FONT]
[FONT="]3-Reviews[/FONT]
[FONT="]There are a bunchof the independent service rating reviews but adding pictures tweets or uniqueexperiences of travelers would interest a first time visitor, There’s alreadysome nice reviews on Trip Advisor but aren’t featured on the website.[/FONT]
[FONT="]4-Currencyconverters[/FONT]
[FONT="]The maincurrencies are displayed but adding Canadian Dollars, China Chinese Yuan ,Japanese Yen .and many more would help more viewers from around different partsof the world to quickly know if their budget is suitable[/FONT]
[FONT="]5-The searchengine[/FONT]
[FONT="]It’s only limitedto country and price range, but adding the purpose of the vacation such aseco-tourism, cultural visit, leisure purpose visit should be considerable[/FONT]
[FONT="]6-The Careerssection[/FONT]
[FONT="]there’s an e-mailto send your resume but there’s a form to fill that is mandatory to put in a date,number of adults and has an option to tick for vacation package, I believe it’snot the right place but rather the form should be changed into requiring thebasic information along with attachment of the curriculum vitae.[/FONT]
[FONT="]7- XXX Tours FAQ[/FONT]
[FONT="]In section 14 it’sabout remarkable sights/activities yet food is mentioned twice, adding a differentvisually informative section for the cuisine & restaurants thatcooperate with Memphis wouldn’t be too bad. [/FONT]
[FONT="]8-Weather[/FONT]
[FONT="]Addinginformation about weather would be important. The average degrees, highestand lowest. Imagine also if there’s a very small popup that tells the Celsius degreein Cairo right now as the viewer browses.[/FONT]
[FONT="] [/FONT]
Subject: Personalsuggestions[/FONT]
[FONT="]Dear Mr XXX[/FONT]
[FONT="]I am writing thisletter to suggest you some improvement in the company’s website from my pointof view pointing them out one by one.[/FONT]
[FONT="]1-I’ll start offwith with a simple addition of adding Night mode, that detects the IP addressof the viewer, depending on his time zone the background becomes black and morenight-friendly. Or add the option of changing the colors after running the samelayout for months, it is nice to update such small areas and catch repeatvisitors by surprise![/FONT]
[FONT="]2-Displaying thepossibility of viewing from the mobile application[/FONT]
[FONT="]After browsing thewebsite for a little bit. It would be nice to find a blank space of yourcountry code and mobile number to fill in order to send you a link to downloadthe app, simply it eases notifications you want to send to the customer such asoffers, new services. Nevertheless the possibility of browsing offline thelatest itineraries aswell as consuming less data when online, a study has foundthat users and travelers in specific spend more time on phones and mobile apps.[/FONT]
[FONT="]3-Reviews[/FONT]
[FONT="]There are a bunchof the independent service rating reviews but adding pictures tweets or uniqueexperiences of travelers would interest a first time visitor, There’s alreadysome nice reviews on Trip Advisor but aren’t featured on the website.[/FONT]
[FONT="]4-Currencyconverters[/FONT]
[FONT="]The maincurrencies are displayed but adding Canadian Dollars, China Chinese Yuan ,Japanese Yen .and many more would help more viewers from around different partsof the world to quickly know if their budget is suitable[/FONT]
[FONT="]5-The searchengine[/FONT]
[FONT="]It’s only limitedto country and price range, but adding the purpose of the vacation such aseco-tourism, cultural visit, leisure purpose visit should be considerable[/FONT]
[FONT="]6-The Careerssection[/FONT]
[FONT="]there’s an e-mailto send your resume but there’s a form to fill that is mandatory to put in a date,number of adults and has an option to tick for vacation package, I believe it’snot the right place but rather the form should be changed into requiring thebasic information along with attachment of the curriculum vitae.[/FONT]
[FONT="]7- XXX Tours FAQ[/FONT]
[FONT="]In section 14 it’sabout remarkable sights/activities yet food is mentioned twice, adding a differentvisually informative section for the cuisine & restaurants thatcooperate with Memphis wouldn’t be too bad. [/FONT]
[FONT="]8-Weather[/FONT]
[FONT="]Addinginformation about weather would be important. The average degrees, highestand lowest. Imagine also if there’s a very small popup that tells the Celsius degreein Cairo right now as the viewer browses.[/FONT]
[FONT="] [/FONT]