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    Letter that needs correction

    I may be able to write in English, but, unfortunately, am not sure of the correctness of the language. Some help/advice is much needed as to see whether the following sentences are fine grammatically. Thanks a lot.

    a. First of all, allow me to express my utmost appreciation to you for giving me the opportunity to serve for this company that truly symbolizes the flags of many nations.

    b. In the eye of a genuinely-spurred leader, current business issues are vital as they form an integral part of any modern establishment. So, it is timely for our company to be professionally spearheaded by an industry doyen who knows the "rachis" of competitive business.

  2. Editor,
    English Teacher
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    Re: Letter that needs correction

    symbolizes the flags of many nations- I'd delete 'the flags'
    genuinely-spurred- spured doesn't work- inspired??

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