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    #1

    Last night I saw a crescent moon

    Last night I saw a crescent moon ignited the beautiful spot that made me attracted its charming and embraced the dark night.

    Today the air is full of cleanliness, everything seems to be wonderful, no one can escape from its halos.

    They're the same.
    Last edited by Rover_KE; 15-Feb-2019 at 10:33. Reason: see post #3

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    #2

    Re: Last night I saw a crescent moon

    Do you have a question to ask?

    I don't really understand the three sentences you have written. They don't seem to be related.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 14-Feb-2019 at 22:26.
    I am not a teacher or a native speaker.

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    #3

    Re: Last night I saw a crescent moon

    Let's concentrate on the first sentence only, lllllll. I've faded out the rest.

    It doesn't make sense. Please tell us in simple language what you are trying to say. It needs to be split up into at least two sentences.

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    #4

    Re: Last night I saw a crescent moon

    Actually I've already checked it myself. Those three sentences I wrote was my thought about the life, so no doubt that it confused you guys.

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    #5

    Re: Last night I saw a crescent moon

    Last night I saw a crescent moon. I looked at it and wondered if it was waning or waxing.


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    #6

    Re: Last night I saw a crescent moon

    Quote Originally Posted by Tarheel View Post
    Last night I saw a crescent moon. I looked at it and wondered if it was waning or waxing.

    The second half bears no relation to the OP's original sentence.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #7

    Re: Last night I saw a crescent moon

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    The second half bears no relation to the OP's original sentence.
    I know, but at least it makes sense.


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    #8

    Re: Last night I saw a crescent moon

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    The second half bears no relation to the OP's original sentence.
    I know, but at least it makes sense.


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    #9

    Re: Last night I saw a crescent moon

    How about:
    Last night, I saw the crescent-shaped moon shine on the beautiful spot(whatever this means), which made me feel attracted to its charm in the dark of the night.
    I am not a teacher or a native speaker.

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    #10

    Re: Last night I saw a crescent moon

    Last night I saw a crescent moon, and it made me think of my sweetheart and how much I was missing her.


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