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    #11

    Re: [Motivation] Letter for visa application

    Dear Sir/Madam,

    I graduated in 2018 with a bachelor degree's in tourism, and I was ranked in the top 10 students (first as a male student) in my first year. I wish to be granted a student visa in order to pursue my master's degree in international tourism to further my academic knowledge in this field.

    I chose "country" because of your renowned education system. A degree from “country” will certainly improve my curriculum and further increase my employment prospects. Moreover, the tuition fees and overall costs are very competitive, yet the quality of education is excellent, bearing in mind that the XXX is ranked in top 10 tourism destinations in the world.

    It is undeniable that the tourism sector in “country” is highly dynamic, rapidly expanding, developing and diverse. It has experienced remarkable growth in recent years, and it is one of the mainstays of the economy in “country”.

    Tourism, needs good management practices, activities in strategic planning, market research, project management and leadership skills. All these demand international and intercultural approaches.

    I chose to apply to "Name of University" because it is located in one of the top tourism destinations in XXX. Well-known destinations like XXXX, XXXX, XXXX or XXXX are not far away and offer the opportunity to work in the tourism sector during my studies and to put into practise what I learn. Furthermore, the dedicated lecturers and the friendly atmosphere in the university will allow me to study effectively and in small groups, using modern equipment. The tight integration with business is a further advantage.

    Another fascinating thing that “City” is very close to the sea and has a UNESCO world heritage site nearby, so it has an environment conducive to learning.

    My interest in having the necessary tourism management knowledge and skills stem from my internships. During my internship at XXX international airport, I interacted with a wide range of nationalities and encountered issues such as delays. There, I learned how an effective manager can contribute to the smooth running of such a dynamic workplace. Also, during my undergraduate studies, I took part in many research projects and went on field visits to several tourist attractions. Speaking with tourists improved my vision of how to manage tourist facilities in a successful way. From my training at the airport, I learned that respect, politeness, knowledge, skill and experience are essential parts of a customer-centered approach.

    Finally, I would like to say that I have many dreams that I look forward to achieving, and I consider that studying in "Country" is the gateway to a bright future for me and for attaining my goals.

    Thank you for considering my visa application, and I look forward to hearing from you.

    Yours faithfully,

    XXX

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    #12

    Re: [Motivation] Letter for visa application

    Quote Originally Posted by KelThuzad View Post
    It's not for the UK. It's for a country where your motivation letter has to cover all the points I mentioned, and the letter is a big factor in whether you get the visa or not.
    Why is the name of the country a secret?

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    #13

    Re: [Motivation] Letter for visa application

    Quote Originally Posted by KelThuzad View Post



    Any examples, please?
    See post #7.

    master's degree

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    #14

    Re: [Motivation] Letter for visa application

    You already mentioned that you had a college degree. You don't need to emphasize that you did well academically.

    The people who get these things don't have much time to read them, and they don't take take much time to read them. So emphasize the main points and go light on details.

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    #15

    Re: [Motivation] Letter for visa application

    Quote Originally Posted by Tarheel View Post
    Why is the name of the country a secret?
    It's not secret, to be honest I was afraid if some people are just gonna copy paste the letter into their own for the same application to the same country

    anyway it's Germany

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