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    Jamila2 is offline Newbie
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    Correction Of inquiry letter

    Hello teacher
    I would like to ask you to correct my letter that I want to send to the hospital to inquire about authenticity of email that send by their HR director..

    Dear Sir/Madam
    Have a nice day
    I would like to inquire about the authenticity of an email sent by your HR director "his name" on 22/2/2019 .the email contains job offer and request from me personal information and contact the xxxxxxx travel and tourism LLD.please confirm if this email from you so I can send you my personal information and contact the agency.
    Thanks in advance.
    My name

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    emsr2d2 is offline Moderator
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    Re: Correction Of inquiry letter

    Quote Originally Posted by Jamila2 View Post
    Hello. teacher

    I would like to ask you to correct my a/this letter that I want to send to the hospital to inquire about the authenticity of an email that was allegedly send sent by their HR director.

    Dear Sir/Madam

    Have a nice day

    I would like to inquire about the authenticity of an email sent by your HR director, [his name], on 22/2/2019. The email contained a job offer, and requested from me my personal information, and asked me to contact the xxxxxxx travel and tourism LLD. Please confirm if this email from you so I can send you my personal information and contact the agency.

    Thanks in advance. I look forward to hearing from you.

    Yours faithfully

    [My name]
    Please note my corrections above. What's a "travel and tourism LLD"?

    Don't put a space before a full stop. Always put a space after a full stop. Start every sentence with a capital letter.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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