Correction Of inquiry letter

[Jamila2]

Hello teacher
I would like to ask you to correct my letter that I want to send to the hospital to inquire about authenticity of email that send by their HR director..

Dear Sir/Madam
Have a nice day
I would like to inquire about the authenticity of an email sent by your HR director "his name" on 22/2/2019 .the email contains job offer and request from me personal information and contact the xxxxxxx travel and tourism LLD.please confirm if this email from you so I can send you my personal information and contact the agency.
Thanks in advance.
My name

 

[emsr2d2]

Hello. [STRIKE]teacher[/STRIKE]

I would like to ask you to correct [STRIKE]my[/STRIKE] a/this letter that I want to send to the hospital to inquire about the authenticity of an email that was allegedly [STRIKE]send[/STRIKE] sent by their HR director.

Dear Sir/Madam

[STRIKE]Have a nice day[/STRIKE]

I would like to inquire about the authenticity of an email sent by your HR director, [his name], on 22/2/2019. The email contained a job offer, [STRIKE]and[/STRIKE] requested [STRIKE]from me[/STRIKE] my personal information, and asked me to contact the xxxxxxx travel and tourism LLD. Please confirm if this email from you so I can send you my personal information and contact the agency.

[STRIKE]Thanks in advance.[/STRIKE] I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully

[My name]

Please note my corrections above. What's a "travel and tourism LLD"?

Don't put a space before a full stop. Always put a space after a full stop. Start every sentence with a capital letter.