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    Can somebody correct this letter if any mistakes

    Reference to our discussion regarding the inner pack of clim film, please be informed that due to your unexpected bulk quantity order in a short span of time and, shortage of the inner box with us, we left with no option but to use alternative box of our another product to pack your product. Kindly accept our sincere apology if any inconvenience caused to you.

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    Re: Can somebody correct this letter if any mistakes

    Quote Originally Posted by sanjeevfernandes View Post
    With reference to our discussion regarding the inner pack of clim cling film, please be informed that due to your unexpected and short-notice bulk quantity order in a short span of time and (no comma here) our shortage of the inner box, with us, we were left with no option but to use alternative a box of our from another product to pack yours. product. Kindly accept our sincere apology if for any inconvenience. caused to you.
    See above for my best attempt. I readily admit I don't really know what it all means but it's now grammatically correct.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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