Request for admission in class 8th.

[Shah ZeB]

Dear Sir,

I have need application for admission in class 8 but student failed entry test, i do admission on my responsibilities.

Shah ZeB

 

[Tdol]

Are you the student that took the entry test or are you taking responsibility for someone else?

 

[emsr2d2]

Dear Sir,

I [STRIKE]have[/STRIKE] need [STRIKE]application[/STRIKE] to apply for admission [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] to class 8 but the student failed the entry test. I do admission on my responsibilities.

Shah ZeB

Please note my corrections above in red. The part I have marked in blue and underlined doesn't make sense. Please explain it using different words.