grammar and style 'the big picture of...'

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Elize

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Hi,
I was wondering if this sentence sounds natural and grammatically correct? And if there's a way to improve it?
It's part of a summary in a resume.

'Strive for clean and compliant code while seeing the big picture of making a difference through the power of technology and communication, one project at a time.'
 

Tarheel

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Does this sentence sound natural? Is it grammatically correct? Is there a way to improve it? (It's part of a summary in a resume.)

'Strive for clean and compliant code while seeing the big picture of making a difference through the power of technology and communication, one project at a time.'

That sentence is confusing to me. However, I do think it is grammatically correct.

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