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    Elize is offline Newbie
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    grammar and style 'the big picture of...'

    Hi,
    I was wondering if this sentence sounds natural and grammatically correct? And if there's a way to improve it?
    It's part of a summary in a resume.

    'Strive for clean and compliant code while seeing the big picture of making a difference through the power of technology and communication, one project at a time.'

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    Re: grammar and style 'the big picture of...'

    Quote Originally Posted by Elize View Post
    Does this sentence sound natural? Is it grammatically correct? Is there a way to improve it? (It's part of a summary in a resume.)

    'Strive for clean and compliant code while seeing the big picture of making a difference through the power of technology and communication, one project at a time.'
    That sentence is confusing to me. However, I do think it is grammatically correct.

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