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    Re: Advantages and disadvantages of campsites

    Ponyo, you need to learn how to make paragraphs.

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    #12

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tarheel View Post
    Ponyo, you need to learn how to make paragraphs.

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    I'm trying to explain a certain topic in each paragraph but sometimes it's hard for me and I don't know why.

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    #13

    Re: Advantages and disadvantages of campsites

    You haven't answered my question in post #10.

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    #14

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    Which exam?
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    #15

    Re: Advantages and disadvantages of campsites

    Take a look at my reply in the following thread:

    https://www.usingenglish.com/forum/t...sity-Education

    Revise your essay, and post the amended version below, if you like.

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    #16

    Re: Advantages and disadvantages of campsites

    Quote Originally Posted by teechar View Post
    Take a look at my reply in the following thread:

    https://www.usingenglish.com/forum/t...sity-Education

    Revise your essay, and post the amended version below, if you like.
    I really thank you for your helpful tips but I think that I had several problems with this essay because I don't like the topic. I won't post an amended version but I posted other essays that I hope you will read and correct

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    #17

    Re: Advantages and disadvantages of campsites

    Ponyo, let's finish the ones that we're working on now before you start any new ones, okay?
    Last edited by Tarheel; 13-May-2019 at 12:31. Reason: Fix punctuation
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    #18

    Re: Advantages and disadvantages of campsites

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    Ponyo, let's finish the ones that we're working on now before you start any new ones?, okay?
    OK! Let me try again.

    One of the cheapest ways to take an adventurous vacation is going camping. Campsites, in fact, are a great accommodation for family and young people holyday because of the many advantages they offer.

    Firstly, going camping is more affordable then staying in a hotel.

    Secondly, adventure is guarantee. What campers love most is the deep contact with the nature and the numerous outdoor activities they can make. Biking, hiking, swimming and sight seeing are an example.

    In addition to what already has been said, camping is very relaxing. Far away from the stressful cities, campers can slow down their pace and enjoy the benefits of fresh air and the calm of stunning landscapes.

    It is also proven that camping has great health benefits: it improves the mood, reduces the stress and increases the vitamin D levels. Moreover, the mentioned outdoor activities give campers the opportunity to make more exercise, which leads to physical and mental benefits.
    Lastly, camping allows people to bond together and make new friends. The common areas, indeed, are perfect to meet other campers and socialize with them.

    A common opinion is that campsites are not a comfortable accommodation. On the contrary, nowadays campsites offer many facilities such as Wi-Fi connection, restaurants, children’s playground and comfortable bungalows and suites.

    Although, it is true that camping has downsides too.

    The equipment needed can be expensive and the setting can be complicated.

    Furthermore, campers have to share with the other guests bathrooms, showers and kitchen, with a consequent lack of privacy.

    Additionally, camping means also a greater exposure to weather condition and animals (bugs included) especially if using a tent.

    To sum up, I think that camping has several disadvantages but the close connection with Mother Nature and the numerous facilities provided by modern campsite will ensure a perfect vacation.

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    #19

    Re: Advantages and disadvantages of campsites

    First paragraph. Perhaps:

    One of the cheapest ways to take an adventurous vacation is to go canping. Campsites, in fact, are a great accommodation for families and young people on holiday ....

    Secoond paragraph. You killed it!
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    #20

    Re: Advantages and disadvantages of campsites

    Third paragraph. Perhaps:

    Secondly, adventure is guaranteed! What campers love most is the close contact with nature and the numerous outdoor activities they can enjoy -- biking, hiking, swimming, and others.

    Fourth paragraph. Second sentence. Perhaps:

    Far away from stressful city life, campers can slow down their pace and enjoy the benefits of freah air and beautiful scenery.

    The words "calm" and "stunning" don't really go together.
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