[Essay] Advantages and disadvantages of campsites

[Tarheel]

Next paragraph. Say:

It has been proven that camping has great health benefits. It improves mood, reduces stress, and increases vitamin D levels.

By exposure to sunshine?

 

[Tarheel]

It can be argued that you don't go camping to meet people. You go camping to get away from people.

 

[Tarheel]

Next paragraph. Say:

A common opinion is that campsites are not comfortable accommodations.

If you want comfort, don't go camping. Same thing for wifi. Restaurants?

 

[ponyo]

Next paragraph. Say:

A common opinion is that campsites are not comfortable accommodations.

If you want comfort, don't go camping. Same thing for wifi. Restaurants?

Tarheel, thank you so much for your corrections and tips. You really helped me!

About the quote, I was trying to explain that that common opinion is not true because nowadays campsites provide many comforts.

 

[Tarheel]

Next paragraph. Perhaps:

It is true that camping has its downsides. You might have to worry about mosquitoes, and you might have to be careful that you don't run into a bear.

Hm