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    #1

    Punctuations

    Would you please help me correct any mistakes in punctuation?

    At first this game will be released for Windows, Linux, Android, and IOS, but then also for PS4.

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    Re: Punctuations

    Why "at first" ? What follows after?

    The game will first be released for Windows...?
    I am not a teacher or a native speaker.

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    #3

    Re: Punctuations

    Quote Originally Posted by topman85 View Post
    Would you please help me correct any mistakes in punctuation?

    At first This game will initially be released for Windows, Linux, Android, and IOS, but then also and later for PS4.
    See above. There was nothing wrong with the punctuation but I have changed the wording.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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