[Grammar] Punctuations

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topman85

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Would you please help me correct any mistakes in punctuation?

At first this game will be released for Windows, Linux, Android, and IOS, but then also for PS4.
 

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Why "at first" ? What follows after?

The game will first be released for Windows...?
 

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Would you please [STRIKE]help me[/STRIKE] correct any mistakes in punctuation?

[STRIKE]At first[/STRIKE] This game will initially be released for Windows, Linux, Android, and IOS, [STRIKE]but then also[/STRIKE] and later for PS4.

See above. There was nothing wrong with the punctuation but I have changed the wording.
 
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