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    #11

    Re: I need help for Songs Lyrics fixing mistakes :) I am a song writer

    Hi emsr2d2,
    there is not a reason. Probably are there because in the beginning there was a "dot" somewhere

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    #12

    Re: I need help for Songs Lyrics fixing mistakes :) I am a song writer

    Hi,
    I am near the end of the song

    you will take on extra shifts - to cover a cruise
    Even though you’re smiling - you can't stand them anymore

    all alone alone alone you
    feel alone alone alone here
    all alone alone alone you
    feel alone alone alone here

    wait honey
    Ohhh it's Friday
    leave all your roles
    Feel free to breathe as you once did



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    #13

    Re: I need help for Songs Lyrics fixing mistakes :) I am a song writer

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    What do you mean by "wearing your hair"?
    I mean "wear" like you do with a jacket

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    #14

    Re: I need help for Songs Lyrics fixing mistakes :) I am a song writer

    Quote Originally Posted by Trace Vaon View Post
    Hi emsr2d2.
    There is not a no reason. They're probably are there because in the beginning there was a "dot" somewhere.
    Do you mean a full stop/period? If so, remember that we use a capital letter for the word directly after a full stop, but not randomly in the middle of a sentence.

    Quote Originally Posted by Trace Vaon View Post
    I mean "wear" like you do with a jacket.
    You can wear your hair in a particular style - "She wore her hair in a bob", for example, but you can't just "wear your hair".

    Please note my corrections above. In standard written English, you must end every sentence with one appropriate punctuation mark (full stop, question mark or exclamation mark), but not an emoticon.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #15

    Re: I need help for Songs Lyrics fixing mistakes :) I am a song writer

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    Do you mean a full stop/period? If so, remember that we use a capital letter for the word directly after a full stop, but not randomly in the middle of a sentence.



    You can wear your hair in a particular style - "She wore her hair in a bob", for example, but you can't just "wear your hair".

    Please note my corrections above. In standard written English, you must end every sentence with one appropriate punctuation mark (full stop, question mark or exclamation mark), but not an emoticon.
    Hi emsr2d2,
    probably it sounds better if I say "fixing your hair" or "pushing your hair". What do you think about it?

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    #16

    Re: I need help for Songs Lyrics fixing mistakes :) I am a song writer

    "Fixing your hair" would work (it's not used much in BrE, but it's OK in AmE, I believe). BrE might use "styling your hair". "Pushing your hair" means nothing.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #17

    Re: I need help for Songs Lyrics fixing mistakes :) I am a song writer

    Unless I've misunderstood, it seems to me that you mean to say wearing your hair. It's not something we usually say but it works in this context.

    fixing your hair has a different meaning.

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    #18

    Re: I need help for Songs Lyrics fixing mistakes :) I am a song writer

    Quote Originally Posted by Trace Vaon View Post
    Hi,
    I am near the end of the song

    you will take on extra shifts - to cover a cruise
    Even though you’re smiling - you can't stand them anymore

    all alone alone alone you
    feel alone alone alone here
    all alone alone alone you
    feel alone alone alone here

    wait honey
    Ohhh it's Friday
    leave all your roles
    Feel free to breathe as you once did


    Hi,
    this message was surpassed. I reply it, waiting for your help

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    #19

    Re: I need help for Songs Lyrics fixing mistakes :) I am a song writer

    Quote Originally Posted by Trace Vaon View Post
    will take on extra shifts - to cover a cruise
    Even though you’re smiling - you can't stand them anymore

    all alone alone alone you
    feel alone alone alone here
    all alone alone alone you
    feel alone alone alone here

    wait honey
    Ohhh it's Friday
    leave all your roles
    Feel free to breathe as you once did
    What do the red parts mean?

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    #20

    Re: I need help for Songs Lyrics fixing mistakes :) I am a song writer

    Quote Originally Posted by jutfrank View Post
    What do the red parts mean?
    To cover a Cruise: I mean have Money for an holiday

    Leave all your roles: I mean , dont be and architect, a chief, a servant, but Only yourself

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