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  1. #1

    Thumbs down Can you correct it please??

    Hi, can you correct it for me please?

    We building homes. We designing dreams.

    We invest in life quality.

    Welcome to your new home.

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    Smile Re: Can you correct it please??

    In my point of view is:


    We build homes. We were designing dreams.

    We invest in life quality.

    Welcome to your new home.

  3. #3

    Re: Can you correct it please??

    If the company is still in the business of constructing homes, I would
    change "were" to "are":
    We are designing dreams.
    or simply:
    We design dreams.
    Hope that helps
    VS

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