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  1. Newbie
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    #1

    Please check grammar of an article I have posted here

    iPhone Vs Android

    iPhone is a smartphone product of Apple Company. It has following advantages.
    Smooth Operating system
    iOS is the operating system of iPhone. Itís Working is flawless. There is never lag in User Interface. Everything runs like fluid. Opening and loading of everything is very fast. Even after six months or a year iPhone device runs as smoothly as a brand new piece does.
    Version updates
    Majority of the iOS devices are compatible with latest version of their operating system.
    According to the official Apple Developer website 83% of all iOS devices are running under the latest version iOS 12. This feature enables the iOS users to have latest features and consistent security updates.
    Ease of use
    Pre-installed apps like FaceTime and iMessage on iPhone makes connecting with contacts very easy. iMessage is easy to use and works efficiently when communicating with other iPhone users. It has attractive features like third party integration, GIFs, emoji and many more.
    Security
    Appleís tight control over its apps and consistent update policy provides iPhone a great security platform.


    Mobile operating system Android is developed by Google. Android phones are manufactured by many companies because of open source model technology. It has following advantages.

    Sideloadinng and alternate app stores
    Sideloading means installing an app from outside the Google play store. It is very easy on an Android device. Just tick mark in the setting and download an app. Besides play store there are many alternative Android app stores that you can use whenever you want.
    Charging and Battery Life
    Android phones have longer battery life and they always have fast chargers included in the box.
    Customization
    It has been one of the Androidís main strengths. Android phones are very easy to customize. You can set up whatever layout you want, change user interface using launchers and add widgets & shortcuts.
    Cost factor
    Due to presence of wide range of manufacturers It is not hard to get the low budget Android phone having good quality.
    Conclusion
    Both iPhone and Android are sophisticated mobile platforms. A buyer should choose the product after referring points discussed here and make decision based on his requirement.

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    #2

    Re: Please check grammar of an article I have posted here

    Quote Originally Posted by hemal View Post
    iPhone Vs Android

    iPhone is a smartphone product of Apple Company. It has following advantages:

    Smooth Operating system
    iOS is the operating system of iPhone. Itís working is flawless. There is never lag in the user interface. Everything runs like fluid. The opening and loading of everything is very fast. Even after six months or a year, iPhone device runs as smoothly as a brand new piece phone does.

    Version updates
    The majority of the iOS devices are compatible with latest version of their operating system.
    According to the official Apple Developer website, 83% of all iOS devices are running under using the latest version iOS 12. This feature enables the iOS users to have the latest features and consistent security updates.
    Ease of use
    Pre-installed apps like FaceTime and iMessage on iPhone makes connecting with contacts very easy. iMessage is easy to use and works efficiently when communicating with other iPhone users. It has attractive features like third party integration, GIFs, emoji and many more.
    Security
    Appleís tight control over its apps and consistent update policy provides iPhone with a great security platform.


    The m
    obile operating system, Android, is developed by Google. Android phones are manufactured by many companies because of the open source model technology. It has the following advantages.

    Sideloadinng and alternate app stores
    Sideloading means installing an app from outside the Google play store. It is very easy on an Android device. Just tick mark in the setting and download an app. Besides play store, there are many alternative Android app stores that you can use whenever you want.
    Charging and Battery Life
    Android phones have longer battery life and they always have fast chargers included in the box.
    Customization
    It has been one of the Androidís main strengths. Android phones are very easy to customize. You can set up whatever layout you want, change user interface using launchers and add widgets & shortcuts.
    Cost factor
    Due to the presence of a wide range of manufacturers, it is not hard to get the a low-budget, good quality Android phone having good quality.
    Conclusion
    Both iPhone and Android are sophisticated mobile platforms. A buyer should choose the product after referring reading the points discussed here and make a decision based on his requirements.
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    I am not a teacher or a native speaker.

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    #3

    Re: Please check grammar of an article I have posted here

    Quote Originally Posted by hemal View Post
    iPhone Vs Android


    The iPhone is a smartphone product of from Apple. Company. It has the following advantages.

    Smooth Operating system
    iOS is the operating system of the iPhone. Itís Its Working functioning is flawless. There is never any lag in the User Interface. Everything runs like fluid very fluidly. The opening and loading of everything is very fast. Even after six months or a year, an iPhone device runs as smoothly as a brand new one. piece does.
    That's all I have time for at the moment.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

  4. teechar's Avatar
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    #4

    Re: Please check grammar of an article I have posted here

    Quote Originally Posted by hemal View Post
    iPhone Vs Android

    The iPhone is a smartphone product of made by Apple. Company. It has the following advantages.

    Smooth Operating system

    iOS is the operating system of iPhones. Its working is flawless. There is never a lag in the user interface. Everything runs smoothly. like fluid. Opening and loading of everything anything is very fast. Even after six months or a year, an iPhone device runs as smoothly as a brand new piece (does).

    Version updates

    The majority of the iOS devices are compatible with latest version of their operating system.
    According to the official Apple Developer website, 83% of all iOS devices are running under the latest version, iOS 12. This feature enables the iOS users to have latest features and consistent security updates.

    Ease of use

    Pre-installed apps like FaceTime and iMessage on the iPhone make connecting with contacts very easy. iMessage is easy to use and works efficiently when communicating with other iPhone users. It has attractive features like third-party integration, GIFs, emojis and many more.

    Security

    Appleís tight control over its apps and consistent update policy provide iPhone users with a great security platform.


    Mobile operating system Android is a mobile operating system developed by Google. Android phones are manufactured by many companies because of thanks to open source model technology. It has the following advantages.

    Sideloadinng and alternate app stores
    Sideloading means installing an app from outside the Google Play store. It is very easy on an Android device. Just place/put tick mark in* the appropriate setting and download an app. Besides the Play store, there are many alternative Android app stores that you can use whenever you want.

    Charging and Battery Life

    Android phones have longer battery life, and they always have fast chargers included in the box.

    Customization

    It This has been one of the Androidís main strengths. Android phones are very easy to customize. You can set up whatever layout you want, change user interface using launchers and add widgets and shortcuts.

    Cost factor

    Due to the presence of wide range of competition between the various manufacturers of Android phones, it is not hard to get the a low cost budget Android phone having good without compromising quality.

    Conclusion

    Both iPhones and Androids are sophisticated mobile platforms. A buyer should choose the product after referring to the points discussed here and make their decision based on his their requirements.
    I don't understand the text in blue.
    *: Note that in AmE, you can say "Just check the appropriate setting, etc."

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