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    Trace Vaon is offline Newbie
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    A song about soul (please, help me to fix any mistakes in the lyrics. this song too)

    Please help me to fix any mistakes in the lyrics of this song too

    Go away
    cross the line, find your hidden essence
    she said
    “Catch your breath and join me…
    I will show you a way to another place...”

    Go away
    all you need to know is inside you
    she said
    “you can take the bird and find out who you really are”


    Go away
    be brave, you could be a new man
    I don't know if you are strong enough, but do it

    AWAY, AWAY, AWAY, AWAY, AWAY, AWAY…

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    Re: A song about soul (please, help me to fix any mistakes in the lyrics. this song t

    Quote Originally Posted by Trace Vaon View Post

    I don't know if you are strong enough, but do it
    The underlined part doesn't seem to fit. What do you mean by it?

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    Re: A song about soul (please, help me to fix any mistakes in the lyrics. this song t

    Quote Originally Posted by teechar View Post
    The underlined part doesn't seem to fit. What do you mean by it?
    I mean " be brave"

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    Re: A song about soul (please, help me to fix any mistakes in the lyrics. this song t

    Quote Originally Posted by Trace Vaon View Post
    I mean " be brave"
    Use that.

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