a song where I need help to fix mistakes

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Trace Vaon

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Hi everyone,
I write here a short extract of another song lyrics: "I don't wanna know your name". This song is about a young girl, her first big emotion with a boy.
Please, help me to fix mistakes. I have to fix 5/6 songs to complete my album and you are angels for me.. :angel:

I don’t wanna know your name
i don’t wanna be like you
i don’t see the sea over there
i don’t know if you can dream

I don’t wanna know your game
I don’t wanna breathe like you
I don’t see the fild over there
I don’t know how you play

And now, take my hand
Because I am burning inside
I'm scared of what's going on between us
I took off once before and now I don't know what to do

Please, hold my hand
Stay with me
Love scares me
Don’t let me down
 

jutfrank

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It's fine.

Note the spelling of field.
 
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