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  1. Newbie
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    a song where I need help to fix mistakes

    Hi everyone,
    I write here a short extract of another song lyrics: "I don't wanna know your name". This song is about a young girl, her first big emotion with a boy.
    Please, help me to fix mistakes. I have to fix 5/6 songs to complete my album and you are angels for me..

    I donít wanna know your name
    i donít wanna be like you
    i donít see the sea over there
    i donít know if you can dream

    I donít wanna know your game
    I donít wanna breathe like you
    I donít see the fild over there
    I donít know how you play

    And now, take my hand
    Because I am burning inside
    I'm scared of what's going on between us
    I took off once before and now I don't know what to do

    Please, hold my hand
    Stay with me
    Love scares me
    Donít let me down

  2. jutfrank's Avatar
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    #2

    Re: a song where I need help to fix mistakes

    It's fine.

    Note the spelling of field.

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