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  1. Clinton John's Avatar
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    #1

    sending a report to my bos

    See status for updated Master list of 'Material Service Requisition', please let me know if anything need to add.

  2. teechar's Avatar
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    #2

    Re: sending a report to my bos

    Hi there, and welcome to the forum.
    Some comments:
    1- I suspect there's no need to capitalize "master" in your text.
    2- The comma in the middle is wrong. That's a common error and is called a comma splice. Change the comma to a full stop (period).
    3- Change "need to add" to "needs to be added".
    4- Note the correct spelling of "boss".

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    #3

    Re: sending a report to my bos

    Quote Originally Posted by Clinton John View Post
    See status for the/an updated Master list of 'Material Service Requisition', please let me know if anything needs to be added.
    My shot.

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