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    #1

    Clive's overconfidence evaporated

    Have I made any mistakes?

    Clive's overconfidence evaporated like a mist into thin air when he was kicked out of his girlfriend's flat. He found himself on the street without money and a place to sleep.

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    #2

    Re: Clive's overconfidence evaporated

    Some could argue that and could make whether he had a place to sleep ambiguous.

    To correct this, change either and to or or without to with neither and and to nor.

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