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    My daily routine

    My daily routine

    Every day, I wake up at six o’clock and get up at six hour and thirteen minutes. Then, I wear my shoes and go out to walk around the park near my house. An hour later, I come my home. I take my tooth then I have a breakfast that my mom prepared. At seven hour and thirty minutes, I go to work.

    I often come home at seven hour pm after my work have finished. I take a bath then I have diner with my family. Sometimes, I eat alone when my parents go out. I help my mom wash the dishes. Then I prepare my clothes for next day. I go to bed at eleven pm.
    Please correct my mistakes.

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    #2

    Re: My daily routine

    Quote Originally Posted by chunchuntthn View Post
    My daily routine

    Every day, I wake up at six o’clock and get up at six hour and thirteen (?) minutes. Then, I wear put on my shoes and go out to walk around the park near my house. An hour later, I come my (or "get") home. I take my tooth brush my teeth. Then I have a breakfast that my mom prepared. At seven hour and thirty minutes, I go to work.

    I often come home at seven hour pm after my work I have finished work. I take a bath. Then I have dinner with my family. Sometimes, I eat alone when my parents go out. I help my mom wash the dishes. Then I prepare my clothes for the next day. I go to bed at eleven PM.
    Please correct my mistakes.
    (?) Did you mean 6:30?

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    Re: My daily routine

    You will see, the more English you read, that we almost always express time using numbers.

    I get up at 6.30am.
    I have dinner at 8pm.
    She walked the dog at 11.45am.

    The exceptions are midday, noon and midnight, all of which are generally expressed in words.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #4

    Re: My daily routine

    Quote Originally Posted by Yankee View Post
    (?) Did you mean 6:30?
    yes.

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    Re: My daily routine

    Quote Originally Posted by chunchuntthn View Post
    Yes.
    Don't forget to capitalise the first/only word of a sentence.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #6

    Re: My daily routine

    This is my rewrite.

    Every day, I wake up at six a’clock and get up at 6:30 am. Then, I put on my shoes and go out to walk around the park near my house. An hour later, I get home. I brush my teeth. Then I have breakfast that my mom prepared. At 7:30 am, I go to work.

    I often come home at 7 pm after I have finished work. I take a bath. Then I have dinner with my family. Sometimes, I eat alone when my parents go out. I help my mom wash the dishes. Then I prepare my clothes for the next day. I go to bed at 11 pm.

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    #7

    Re: My daily routine

    Quote Originally Posted by chunchuntthn View Post
    This is my rewrite.

    Every day, I wake up at six a’clock 6am and get up at 6:30. am. Then (no comma here) I put on my shoes and go out to walk around the park near my house. An hour later, I get home, I brush my teeth. Then I and have breakfast, that which my mom prepared prepares. At 7:30, am I go to work.

    I often come home from work at 7pm after I have finished work. I and take a bath. Then I have dinner with my family. Sometimes, if my parents are out, I eat alone. when my parents go out. I always help my mom wash the dishes, then I prepare my clothes for the next day and I go to bed at 11pm.
    Note my suggested changes above. Once you have established that you are talking about mornings, by saying "6am", you don't need to keep repeating "am".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #8

    Re: My daily routine

    Thanks emsr2d2

    Every day, I wake up at 6 am and get up 6:30. Then I put on my shoes and go out to walk around the park near my house. An hour later, I get home, I brush my teeth and have breakfast, which my mom prepares. At 7:30, I go to work.
    I often come home from work at 7pm and take a bath. Then I have dinner with my family. Sometimes, if my parents are out, I eat alone. I always help my mom wash the dishes, then I prepare my clothes for the next day and I go to bed at 11pm.

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    Re: My daily routine

    OK, but there is no need to post the entire thing again just to show that you can read my corrections. Clicking on the "Thank/Like" buttons on post #7 would have been sufficient.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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