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  1. Newbie
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    A song about a baby girl (please, help me to fix any mistakes . this song too)

    Please help me to fix any mistakes in the lyrics of this song too



    today is a special day, you are opening a new door...
    you will remember the dress.. the dress you're wearing now
    the colours around you, the smell in the air, the faces in the room, you are unconscious and thrilled
    ... and you are my sun!

    I am ready to be upsidedown , and look at your eyes
    I hope it won't rain , my thoughts go out to you, I take a look at my past
    , and I live again the time when my hands were trying to paint the world

    And every one who loves you... is there with you,
    like angels on your shoulder, they protect you
    the colours around you, the smell in the air, the faces in the room, you are unconscious and thrilled
    ... and you.. you are my sun!

    I am ready to be upsidedown , and look at your eyes
    I hope it wont rain , my thoughts go out to you
    I take a look at my past, and I live again the time when my hands was trying to paint the world

  2. teechar's Avatar
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    #2

    Re: A song about a baby girl (please, help me to fix any mistakes . this song too)

    - "upside down" (two words).
    - "everyone" (one word).
    - "hands were trying".
    Apart from those, there are punctutation and capitalization issues, but they're probably secondary, given this is a song.

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