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    I am trying to write a company profile.

    I am trying to write a company profile. However, I'm not a native! so not too sure if it sounds like English ha
    can someone help me?


    The company was established in 1995.

    Mainly on cutting and processing of steel pipes in the early stage. In 2012 our brand, ____ was created.

    We have been working around on bike and vehicle locks for the past 24 years, with more than 80 patents and many cooperation experiences on OEM and ODM.

    With well-developed skill, we will continue providing high-quality products for our guests.

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    #2

    Re: I am trying to write a company profile.

    Quote Originally Posted by tangweichien View Post
    I am trying to write a company profile. However, I'm not a native speaker of English, so I'm not too sure if it sounds natural.like English ha
    Can someone help me?


    The company was established in 1995.

    We were mainly focused on the cutting and processing of steel pipes in the early stage. In 2012, our brand, ____ was created.

    We have been working around on bike and vehicle locks for the past 24 years, with more than 80 patents and many cooperation experiences on OEM and ODM.

    With well-developed our solid expertise and highly skilled staff, we will continue providing high-quality products for our customers. guests.
    Hello tangweichien, and welcome to the forum.
    I don't understand the parts highlighted in blue. Please rephrase/explain them.

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    #3

    Re: I am trying to write a company profile.

    Quote Originally Posted by tangweichien View Post
    I am trying to write a company profile. However, I'm not a native! so not too sure if it sounds like English ha
    can someone help me?


    The company was established in 1995, mainly on cutting and processing of steel pipes in the early stage. In 2012 our brand, ____ was created.

    We have been working around on bike and vehicle locks for the past 24 years, with more than 80 patents and many cooperation cooperative relationships with OEM and ODM manufacturers.

    With our well-developed skill, we will continue providing high-quality products for our guests clients.
    Suggestions, if my understanding is accurate.

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    Re: I am trying to write a company profile.

    I would say:

    With our well-developed skills ....

    (Either customers or clients might work there.)
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    #5

    Re: I am trying to write a company profile.

    Quote Originally Posted by teechar View Post
    Hello tangweichien, and welcome to the forum.
    I don't understand the parts highlighted in blue. Please rephrase/explain them.
    Thank you for your big help! it helps me a lot
    I'm not always in front of the computer so the reply may be a bit late...


    Working around on: Meaning that we have been working on this for a long time. Should I say working on instead of working around on?


    Cooperation experiences: Trying to say we do OEM and ODM for other companies, and it's been a while and has lots of experience.

    I rephrased it like this:
    We have been working on bike and vehicle locks for the past 24 years, with more than 80 patents and partner with other companies as an OEM and ODM manufacturer.

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    #6

    Re: I am trying to write a company profile.

    Quote Originally Posted by tangweichien View Post
    Thank you for your big help! it helps me a lot.
    You're welcome.

    Quote Originally Posted by tangweichien View Post
    I'm not always in front of the computer so the reply may be a bit late.
    No problem.

    Quote Originally Posted by tangweichien View Post
    Working around on: Meaning that we have been working on this for a long time. Should I say working on instead of working around on?
    Yes.

    Quote Originally Posted by tangweichien View Post
    Cooperation experiences: Trying to say we do OEM and ODM for other companies, and it's been a while and has we have lots of experience in that.
    Quote Originally Posted by tangweichien View Post
    I rephrased it like this:
    We have been working on bike and vehicle locks for the past 24 years, with more than 80 patents, and we partner with other companies as an OEM and ODM manufacturer.
    See above.

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    #7

    Re: I am trying to write a company profile.

    Quote Originally Posted by tangweichien View Post
    We have been working on bike and vehicle locks for the past 24 years. We have more than 80 patents and partner with other companies as an OEM and ODM manufacturer.
    That's how I would phrase that.
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