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    As satisfying as it is to assemble a shiny new gaming PC

    Howdy,

    Would you mind correcting any mistakes in this chunk of text?

    As satisfying as it is to assemble a shiny new gaming PC or unwrap a lovely new console on Christmas morning, there's no denying how convenient it would be to just load up and play games from anywhere even if you're using a system that isn't all that powerful. Although simple browser games have been around for a long time, running anything more immersive or powerful has typically required some sort of dedicated hardware. However, nowadays there are a number of services that are trying to alleviate the load that your computer has to handle by streaming games directly to your PC. This is possible since most of the computational burden falls on a server somewhere far away, which renders the frames of the game and delivers them to your PC via the internet.

    In view of rising internet speeds and games taking up more and more space on your computer's local storage, game streaming is becoming an increasingly crowded marketplace especially with Google announcing their new streaming service called Stadia. It'll work with nothing more than a browser or a smart TV an internet connection and then optionally Google's own game controller. Despite the hype that's been around it, there are a few things that customers would like to see from Stadia to help propel game streaming more to the forefront.
    Last edited by Disckstuckinfan; 05-Jul-2019 at 23:47.
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    Re: As satisfying as it is to assemble a shiny new gaming PC

    Did you write that yourself?
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  3. Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    #4

    Re: As satisfying as it is to assemble a shiny new gaming PC

    To the OP:
    You were notified previously about our reservations regarding posting the same question on multiple forums. See link below.
    https://www.usingenglish.com/forum/t...-in-which-they

    Can you tell us why you've done it again?

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    Re: As satisfying as it is to assemble a shiny new gaming PC

    I did not get replies this time. Honestly, why do you care if I post on other forums? The internet is a free and public space where anyone can express themselves without fear of censorship. Besides, I do not open the same thread simultaneously on different sites.
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    Re: As satisfying as it is to assemble a shiny new gaming PC

    Quote Originally Posted by Tarheel View Post
    Did you write that yourself?
    Yes. Do the paragraphs sound unnatural?
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    Re: As satisfying as it is to assemble a shiny new gaming PC

    It's very good. I haven't noticed any mistakes. The reason I asked that question is if you can write like that you don't need a forum like this one.
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    Re: As satisfying as it is to assemble a shiny new gaming PC

    Quote Originally Posted by Disckstuckinfan View Post
    Honestly, why do you care if I post on other forums? The internet is a free and public space where anyone can express themselves without fear of censorship.
    Because many of the same people answer on different forums and get tired of seeing the same things asked. They also have the right to express themselves without fear- freedom works both ways.

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