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    #1

    If I miss my one day of exercise my whole week's schedule gets distorted.

    If I miss my one day of exercise my whole week's schedule gets distorted.

    Please check my sentence.

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    #2

    Re: If I miss my one day of exercise my whole week's schedule gets distorted.

    Add a comma after "exercise".

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    #3

    Re: If I miss my one day of exercise my whole week's schedule gets distorted.

    "distorted" doesn't work there for me. I'd say something like "... my whole week's schedule is/gets thrown off/out".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #4

    Re: If I miss my one day of exercise my whole week's schedule gets distorted.

    Quote Originally Posted by tufguy View Post
    If I miss my one day of exercise my whole week's schedule gets distorted thrown off.
    That's one possible version.
    I am not a teacher.

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    #5

    Re: If I miss my one day of exercise my whole week's schedule gets distorted.

    I do not see how your not exercising for one day in the week would affect your schedule. I thought you would have more time for other things.
    You probably feel uneasy not getting to exercise as you have been used to.
    I am not a teacher or a native speaker.

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    #6

    Re: If I miss my one day of exercise my whole week's schedule gets distorted.

    Quote Originally Posted by teechar View Post
    Add a comma after "exercise".
    If I miss my one day of exercise, my whole week's schedule gets distorted.

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    Re: If I miss my one day of exercise my whole week's schedule gets distorted.

    Did you actually read any of the other responses, tufguy?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: If I miss my one day of exercise my whole week's schedule gets distorted.

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    Did you actually read any of the other responses, tufguy?
    Sorry, for that mistake.

    If I miss my one day of exercise, my whole week's schedule gets thrown off.

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    #9

    Re: If I miss my one day of exercise my whole week's schedule gets distorted.

    Quote Originally Posted by tufguy View Post
    If I miss my one day of exercise, my whole week's schedule gets thrown off.
    I am not a teacher.

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    #10

    Re: If I miss my one day of exercise my whole week's schedule gets distorted.

    I just want to check that you are aware that saying "my one day of exercise" means (given the mention of a week later on) that you exercise on only one day of the week, every week.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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