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    Mark had been saving for months

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    Mark had been saving for months to buy his wife a pair of Christian Loubutin shoes for her birthday, which he would bitterly regret. A few weeks later, Anna walked out on him, leaving him to wrestle with his debts. Mark felt like a squeezed-out sponge, empty of life, lacking energy to face another day.

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    Re: Mark had been saving for months

    Perhaps:

    Mark saved up for months to buy the Christian Loubutin shoes he gave his wife for her birthday. A few weeks later, Anna walked out on him, leaving him to wrestle with his debts. Mark felt like a squeezed out sponge, empty of life, lacking the energy to face another day.
    Last edited by teechar; 14-Jul-2019 at 10:01. Reason: typo
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