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    framework contract

    Hello,

    The first framework contracts for cooperation in the year 2019 are signed

    Ship Repair Yard Barnim begins the year 2019 with the first framework contracts to cooperate in the field of repairing ships. Another framework contract has been entered into with the ship-owner Bereederungsgesellschaft Altership mbH & Co. KG for 5 ships to be repaired this year. All bulk carriers will undergo dry-dock repair.

    Another framework contract has been entered into with the ship-owner Bereederungsgesellschaft Altership mbH & Co. KG for 5 ships to be repaired this year.

    or

    Another framework contract has been entered into with the ship-owner Bereederungsgesellschaft Altership mbH & Co. KG to repair 5 ships this year.

    or

    Another framework contract has been entered into with the ship-owner Bereederungsgesellschaft Altership mbH & Co. KG for the repair of 5 ships this year.

    or

    Another framework contract for 5 ships to be repaired this year has been entered into with the ship-owner Bereederungsgesellschaft Altership mbH & Co. KG.

    or

    Another framework contract to repair 5 ships this year has been entered into with the ship-owner Bereederungsgesellschaft Altership mbH & Co. KG.

    The original sentence reads as follows:

    Another framework contract has been entered into with the ship-owner Bereederungsgesellschaft Altership mbH & Co. KG and concerns the repair of 5 ships this year. In my opinion, the original sentence is lengthy and stifled, so I decided to make some adjustments as above.

    What do you think?

    Repair of the ships is to take place this year.

    All the text was made up by me.
    Last edited by JACEK1; 15-Jul-2019 at 13:22.

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    #2

    Re: framework contract

    What do I think? I think stifle is a verb.

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    #3

    Re: framework contract

    Sorry, it should be stifled. I have corrected it.

    Could you answer my question?
    Last edited by JACEK1; 15-Jul-2019 at 16:29.

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