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    A security guard

    This is the first paragraph.

    A security guard

    My company gives a plan for the vacation. The following this plan, all of people will have on holiday at the sea. Every one also agree to join this plan. But there is a little problem, no one will remain at the company as a security guard. So I decide that I would became a security guard for some days.

    Please correct my mistakes.

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    Re: A security guard

    Quote Originally Posted by chunchuntthn View Post
    This is the first paragraph.

    A security guard

    My company gives a plan for the vacation. I don't know what this means.

    The following this plan, all of people will have on holiday at the sea. I have underlined errors. Try again.

    Every one also agree to join this plan. I have underlined errors. Try again.

    But there is a little problem, no one will remain at the company as a security guard. The punctuation is wrong. Can you work out why?

    So I decide that I would became a security guard for some days. I have underlined errors. Try again.
    See above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: A security guard

    A security guard

    My company gives a plan for the vacation. I don't know what this means.
    >>>It means the company will have a holiday for all staffs
    The following this plan, all of people will have on holiday at the sea. I have underlined errors. Try again.
    >>>Following this plan, people will have a holiday at the sea.
    Every one also agree to join this plan. I have underlined errors. Try again.
    >>>Everyone also agrees to join this plan.
    But there is a little problem, no one will remain at the company as a security guard. The punctuation is wrong. Can you work out why?
    >>>But, there is a little problem, no one will remain at the company as a security guard. (Actually, I don’t understand clearly about using the punctuation. Please explain to me)
    So I decide that I would became a security guard for some days. I have underlined errors. Try again.
    >>>So I decided that I would became a security guard for some days

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    #4

    Lightbulb Re: A security guard

    Perhaps:

    The company announced a plan/shedule for vacation days.

    And:

    Everyone agreed to the plan.

    (I'm not sure what that means in that context.)

    And:

    Everybody decided to go to the beach.

    And;

    But there is a problem. The plant will be empty while everybody is on vacation.

    And:

    So I volunteer to become a security guard while everybody else is on vacation.
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